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|  | WARNING!!! Teenage Angst from a Death Metal Fan
« Thread Started on Apr 19, 2004, 12:56pm » | |
Ok, have written loads of stuff, so have decided to post my favourites, every drawm line means a new piece:
I found what I never wanted to feel
Now reality seems so unreal
I found love
I found hell
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul (Heavy)
Wipe the tears from your eye
They’re dripping blood for all to see
Cant we just break out of here
7 Slices of true love
Scarred for all to see
Wearing their badge of pride in disgrace
The true meaning of love
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul
And she worries my soul (Heavy)
The mirror shows me the truth
The monster I’ve become
The twisted face
Shows what’s hidden inside
Redefine right and wrong
The True meaning of love
And it worries my soul
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Why don’t I want to wake from my nightmares?
Im seeing everything clearer now
Now everything I had has died
Im left alone writhing in reality
Everyone else is hallucinating
Seeing warped signs of sanity
So teach me your textbook way to die
I wasn’t going to get out alive
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Liquid Soul was flammable
Set alight by the spark of life
In Flame me, Burn me out
Only way out of this inferno
Is the loaded escape route in my hand
This wars over for me
Didn’t want to see the other side without this escape route
c***ed and Loaded.
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And she moves like the devil in leather
Walks like hell on earth
Intoxicating
Hypnotising
Addictive
Hell on earth
But I’m in heaven with my little devil in leather
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Open your eyes child
untimely sight
this is our worl
were you ripped from your life
taken from your blanket
and cast into the flames
feel the ashes burn your heart
feel the ashes burn your life
Now these eyes can never be sealed
doomed to witness your descendence
youll never understand
what you were locked away from
itsnot for the best
its merely to be
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leave me here to enjoy my insanity
leave me to fall furher along this chain
just place this lock around me legs
and thrust the key into my eye
leave me here to enjoy my insanty
leave me to fall further along this chain
each link cries of another time
another memory cut into my arm
the darkness enlightens me
and beckons to the past
which is choking the future
until its limp and cold
so what are you crawling towads
when the future lies choked in time
I see you hurry past me
with my sole good eye
but i stay here
leave me here to enjoy my insanity
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| | Re: WARNING!!! Teenage Angst from a Death Metal Fa
« Reply #1 on May 23, 2004, 11:12am » | |
New lyrics, about capital punishment, these are purely my views, please do not take offence, it is what I feel on the subject.
Humanity is always falls down
Becuase of the Sh*t were forced to carry with us
The filth pollute this world
Whilst the pure decay in their undeserved holes
Line them up,
Kill them all,
Yet watch as the death count falls
One shot killed an innocent,
yet nine more died on the inside
ten deaths, with just one shot
the laws a crime
whils they still breathe
by our humainty were better than them
they kill wthout concious sanity
without soul
we do it for justice
we waste whats ours on them
whilst they waste another life
Shoot them with a bullet labelled 'Remorse'
Poison them with conscience
Then dispose the disgrace
The waster of life
Let them taste the cold steel of tormented soul
or give them a blind eye?
A pardon and a cell?
(Purely my own views, i do not want a theological discussion on whether capital punishment is right, this is what i believe)
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« Reply #2 on Jun 10, 2004, 10:31am » | |
New Stuff:
Pain Controls me, shoots and grips every single nerve
Every single dead cell
poison flows through empty veins
nothing beats, nothin lives, yet something
Grows in this labrynith of Majesty
Seeing through the torment of the night
The Pale moonlight beckons
And leads to death, and to destiny
An empty breath in the beauty fo the night
Cleasned with a thousand blasphemous souls
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Kiss the sky and theyll shoot you right back down
A bullet in the eye
lodged in the brain
Clipping the wings of the free
Those who fall through a dream
Plummet to earth and devastate
Devastate those that will never cure
A blind eye turned to the pity
To the one that they destroyed
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| | Re: WARNING!!! Teenage Angst from a Death Metal Fa
« Reply #3 on Jul 15, 2004, 11:07am » | |
Very nice...however, some of them seem not more than one verse. I would love to see you expand on these songs, see what you can do 
They're great.
P.S. I'm a songwrite too, but my songs blow so badly that I'm not going to post them up here
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| | Re: WARNING!!! Teenage Angst from a Death Metal Fa
« Reply #4 on Jul 17, 2004, 11:07pm » | |
Yeah try expanding on those 'one verse wonders' 
I write songs, but only in times of mental trauma usually... or something else extreme... most of you know how I was when I wrote bled cold...
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« Reply #5 on Jul 26, 2004, 2:55am » | |
Indeed, bled cold is a good song. Do you pay any instruments? So, which any particular one verse wonders are worthy of more work?
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| | Re: WARNING!!! Teenage Angst from a Death Metal Fa
« Reply #6 on Aug 8, 2004, 3:50am » | |
Why look down to the ground
When the one you mourn has acsended
Can you hear the
Can you hear the Thunder
Drenching the land in frozen tears
For those mourned and forgotten
One stop Spiritual Genocide
Turnign the world into
Emotional Revolution
Cant take the perfect death
Couldn't take a divine land
Mentally repelled
We watch everyone
Watching us in disgust
As we look to the sky
Cant we stop killing ourselvses long enough
to escape and heighten.
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« Reply #7 on Aug 26, 2004, 2:39am » | |
Taker of life
Deceitful Spreader of Lies
As I watch the candle burn
And that candle kills us all
In a thundering rebirth
Fiery apocalyptic ceasefire
In a shower of sweat
And a veil of feathers
Too kill what died before creation
They read our emotions
From the barrel of a gun
And the pain of thousands
Leads to the joy of one
Their faces laugh away the tears within
Destroy the nerve and the spine
Where did it all go?
We burnt it with tears
And killed the idea with a belief
Were better off choking all the hollow minds
Regretful genocide
Spiritual suicide
The dying swan gave birth
Before death it was born
With a crown upon its head
It was poisoned by
The pain in the water
The signet died
And was born again
No crown
It was one of the others
In a shower of sweat
And a veil of feathers
Too kill what died before creation.
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In this graveyard we feel
A century of names
We can see a day of feelings
Will we all be forgotten and
Committed to a grassy knoll
Will we all hear our knell?
In this church I sense a thousand sermons
The words have died here too
I feel the spirits crying out
All around for another voice
Too sing for their sorrows
The light shins upon the altar
Telling us the place and age
Of creation in just paper
I wont be cursed here
I don’t believe
I turn from their sorrows laughing
As the light burns the altar
And the ashes of creation cry for another
Try to convince this mind
As it ignites the whole church
Religion is a choice
The dead made theirs
We make ours
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The knell rings
But something protects me for another day
Still moving, still breathing
Alive for another day
Millions will die, thousands a day
But when does it come for me
When is my time?
How long do I believe?
How long do I live?
How long does this body beat and breathe?
Who has the right too rule my life?
They’ll never take me until I choose my time
We all die, in our own time
No slave master with a whip
We’re not puppets on strings
These strings will turn to chains
Our wings are chipped
The time comes closer
Our time gets closer
We all die in time
But ill die when I choose
I close my eyes and see the ever present pendulum
I will choose when to break the flow
I take my life, no one else
As soon as were born
We die a little everyday
Our daily taxation
To the will of something else
I refuse to pay
I chose when
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« Reply #8 on Oct 4, 2004, 10:53am » | |
A little something if anyones interested:
Youve spoken so much
that now your words have no significance or meaning to me.
Yet you keep on.
Wasting your breath, wasting our time, wasting my life.
Wasting our life, and wasting mine
Its all meaningless
And now theres nothign better to live for today
than the future
except what the future will never hold for us.
And all your words now, are just sounds,
And all these images, are just colours
Everything means nothing to me now
Everything is nothing to me.
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« Reply #9 on Nov 8, 2004, 4:32pm » | |
Little something that came to me, if anyones interested:
Your religion is the cure
for your own self esteem
You fade into subnormality
you ascend into the realm
of elegance and grace
that greats you with the death
of a misled deity
just stand back and consider
the demise of your won destiny
and the birth of your existence
in the corruption of reality
Or are you to descend into
the eternal spring of departed souls
twisted and cleansed into
the furnace of life,
the spring of dying hope,
where the forgotten will go
youll cry until you search your mind
for the moment when you strayed
and beckoned the eternal flame closer
And placed it around your neck
a burden to forever carry,
and one you will never repent
Opinions? Thinking of a nice bridgy chorus bit for it.
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| | Re: WARNING!!! Teenage Angst from a Death Metal Fa
« Reply #10 on Nov 18, 2004, 12:07pm » | |
good
youve written better in your time but these are better than most Ive read
keep it up and try to expand on some (I know you can)
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« Reply #11 on Nov 18, 2004, 12:14pm » | |
I try, I am always blessed with havign a riff in my head at the same time, Most of these lyrics have been inspired by Decapitiated, or various other metal bands, so yeay. Am listening to a lot more metal now, its all sooo good.
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« Reply #12 on Dec 8, 2004, 3:15pm » | |
The World is changing
And the tears
shatetred the crucifix
and it burned
in the water of the desolate lake,
an echo
in the darkness
now decimates
the culprit of peace
And memory
of the matyr
for the truth and the pure was buried alive
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